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romanajo123 ([personal profile] romanajo123) wrote in [community profile] tenminutesaday2024-04-19 08:55 pm

Fill (sort of)- Challenge 339 (DW BFA)

 


I do plan to continue the Eight/Charley thing. And definitely fix a lot of the inaccuracies I had. 


I’m learning a lot about this time period! (Some of it a little odd)


But here’s some notes and ideas for where I want this story to go…

  1. Fix the beginning and take out the P&P quote.  On a tangential note I am getting that one Manga Classics version off of Amazon. I have a gift card I got for Christmas.  And might also look for other work ( though maybe not in manga form) by the same author

  2.  Work on Charley’s behavior since thinking about it now,  you are right. Based on what I know now she really does seem improper. 

  3.   Expand a little on what I was going to do with Eight. And work on his backstory. 

  4. For now, I am leaving C’rizz out.  Mostly because I am not sure how he would fit. In the audios, he’s a monk. But… also he is literally a giant chameleon.  (And he does change colors more than once).

  5.  After their initial meeting at the ball, Eight and Charley don’t see each other again for a day or so . Until  she is out for a walk ( since I learned that was one of the few things besides riding or dancing women did as recreation. They  apparently were told to not exert themselves. :P ) 

  6.  Something happens to her, nothing lethal  but her gown gets caught or something

  7. Eight happens to be riding by the area and helps her. Side note:  In this case, I am spelling TARDIS as “Tardis”  since here it’s his horse.  With a blue saddle or blanket on it. 

  8. They ride together and get to know each other better.. Charley after a while calls him one of the oddest men she has ever met ( a call back to Storm Warning) . 

  9. More time passes,  more pining and eventually he attempts to propose to her…

  10.  However, at this point ,  the dream ends and Charley wakes up.  Tells the Doctor about the dream and he goes all philosophical and science about it; trying to figure out why she had that particular dream when it’s just a case of “she was reading the book and fell asleep.”  But Charley admits it was a wonderful dream.