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shivver13 ([personal profile] shivver) wrote in [community profile] tenminutesaday2022-01-24 10:52 am
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Fill: Challenge #7 (Doctor Who

This is from a story I'm writing which consists of journal entries by Verity Newman, Joan Redfern's great-granddaughter, about writing "A Journal of Impossible Things". The headings are temporary - I've figured out when they happen vs. the time stamps in AHistory, but haven't nailed down the exact dates yet.


A Monday in June, 2008:

The news today! The Royal Hope Hospital, the one across the Thames from Parliament, it disappeared - left a big hole in the ground. They said big rhino aliens took it to the moon and then brought it back. That was in the journal! One of the less coherent entries, mostly scribbles about medical students and little shops and how thick the rhinos were. No ending. But now I know how Joan must have felt, seeing things in the journal happen.

I wonder, though, how she must have felt knowing the Doctor had returned, that the man who had taken her love away had returned again. She did write that when she met the Doctor, finally, she saw nothing of John in him and “cared not at all for him”, but she must have thought of him when she saw those journal stories unfolding from afar. Maybe that’s how the story should end.


Next day:

Chatted with Ella, and we realised things in the journal had already happened to the Doctor - John’s dreams were remembering, not predicting. So the Doctor doing the things Joan read about - and the one on the moon yesterday - he didn’t know her yet. He wasn’t “returning” like I said. I’m so glad I have Ella to keep all this science fiction stuff straight. Or is that science fact?

It did make me think, though, about Martha. Yesterday was also in the past for her, in some sense of the word. Joan said in her journal that Martha came from about a century in the future - maybe she meant now? It’d help to know this, so I can write her culture shock better. I’ll ask Abby if she can find a medical student named Martha within the past five or ten years. Joan said “coloured”, so black - not likely Indian or Middle Eastern. Not much to go on. Maybe she was at the Royal Hope - John did write about medical students. But Abby says she’s been enjoying looking things up for me, so maybe this’ll be a challenge for her.

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[personal profile] romanajo123 2022-01-25 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
That’s incredible. I love idea of her reading the Journal. It makes sense Joan would’ve probably used that terminology for Martha, given the period.

Wait Smith & Jones is 2008?