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romanajo123 ([personal profile] romanajo123) wrote in [community profile] tenminutesaday2022-01-31 06:28 pm

Fill -Challenge 10

 It was a sunny November morning at Farringham School, and Doctor Smith, the new science teacher was in the middle of only his second class of the day. 

"So" he began as he scrawled on the chalkboard "In 1609, Johannes Kepler wrote that the planets in the Solar System orbit in an ellipse. This contradicts the previous-" Right at that moment, the bell rang.

"Ah, class dismissed." 

As a flurry of boys and less than a handful of girls filed out of the classroom, one of them, Nyssa , stayed behind a minute.

"How was I?" Doctor Smith asked "I fear I'm coming across rather dry."

"I found it quite fascinating, Doctor." she answered.

"Nyssa, do feel free to not refer to me so formally," he said, starting to prepare his desk for the next class. "I am, after all, family."

"Sorry, Doctor-I mean, uncle" Nyssa quickly corrected herself. That was going to be hard to adjust. The Trakenite quietly reached into the pocket of her uniform.  The watch was there, ticking like normal.  As she began walking to her next class, she wondered how Tegan was doing.

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Several weeks later, Doctor Smith was having a rather terrible sleepless night.  He'd had them more and more lately-and now he was having the most peculiar of dreams.  He'd considered speaking to the school nurse about it, but for now he took out a pen and the journal on his nightstand. The pages were filled with the most incredible stories: metal men,  gigantic lizards, vampires. There were stories of far off places. A few pages had small drawings-some were his two nieces, some had other figures he didn't recognize. All so vivid and real..but only dreams.
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"I have had it!" Tegan exclaimed later that afternoon. "Someone get me out of this place!" Classes had ended for the day and both girls had a bit of a break.
"Tegan," Nyssa started "we have to stay here for at least three months. The Doctor is in danger."
"I know!" the Australian cried. "But if I have to put up with one more of these stupid old professors asking me where his tea is or to sort his books, I'm going to murder him myself and save those Family things the trouble."Tegan groaned. "If I wanted all this, I could've stayed an air stewardess."
"I thought you got 'the sack' ." 
"I did! But that's the point, Nyssa. I-wait a minute!" A sudden noise made both girls turn towards the window. There, outside, piercing through the night sky, were flashes of green light and shooting stars.

(A/N- So, this...happened. ;p I know I know, cliche divergence but Human Nature is my fave Who Thing and it was kind of fun! I feel like this could be expanded somehow.  And sorry Miss Redfern but I couldn't think of what to do with you)
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[personal profile] shivver 2022-02-01 07:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I was enjoying the fic a lot, but now it's gotten stuck in the inevitable "Okay, the Doctor's back and he can't possibly love me like John did, and I won't admit that I still love him" and "Okay, I'm back, and I do still love Donna but I can't actually admit that" phase which happens in every HN-with-Donna fic I've ever seen. :D BMG always ends it well (I expect it will involve a lot of Jenny preciousness), but I never enjoy it while it's happening.

It would probably help you to figure how Nyssa's and Tegan's relationships to John Smith if you figured out what story about them you want to tell. Like, in the episode, Cornell needed to keep Martha nearby at all times so that she could protect John and plausibly walk in on him and Joan, while also have no authority and be the target of racial discrimination, so he made her a maid living at the school. In the novel, there was no imminent threat at the beginning, so John didn't need protecting, so Benny was his niece and lived in the village as an artist. See what I mean? Figure out what the story is, then assign them roles to accomplish that.

I did see the lockdown videos! They were great in general, but I didn't like the Daughter of Mine only because I've already written a story about her fate and I hate having my headcanon destroyed. :)