Date: 2024-03-26 07:57 pm (UTC)
shivver: (DT eek)
From: [personal profile] shivver
Ya know, if I removed the description and tightened up the dialogue a little, I could post this as a drabble. The last line is a great punchline.

I might do that. Then reuse it, all spruced up, in the main story whenever I get to it.

Edit: Changed my mind. I pulled out all the description and tightened the dialogue... and it just didn't work. Without knowing they're in Camden Market, Will saying that they're shopping just doesn't make sense halfway through, and then the ending doesn't have much punch. :P
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