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 (Your example about Sarah Jane's car got me thinking of the Third Doctor and his awesome little car )

"Hand me that spanner, would you Jo?" the Doctor's voice came from under the bonnet of the yellow roadster. 

"This one?" Jo asked, handing him a small green spanner that seemed to be glowing. 

"Perfect" he answered.  

Jo sighed.  They were meant to be on holiday in Dorset, enjoying the coast.  Somehow the holiday had involved actual dinosaurs and the Doctor now needing to repair Bessie's tyres and engine. 

"Are you finished yet, Doctor?" Jo asked, a bit impatiently. 

"Not quite. I believe I might be in need of a torch" the Doctor answered, "It appears one of our small Jurassic friends has made a home in here. " 

(A few things I had to look up- "spanner" meaning a wrench, " bonnet" meaning the hood of a car,  Dorset is a county on the English Channel that's part of the Jurassic Coast and where Mary Anning made a discovery)
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Liza swallowed hard, clutching the bowl to her chest. "Go on," her mum had said, "go over the road and borrow 200 grams of flour. A good way for you to meet the new neighbours." It hadn't sounded difficult, but now, as she stared at the two boys playing tiggy in the garden, she backed against the front door, quaking.


Lots of Britishisms here. We all know "mum", and "over the road" was one of my examples in the challenge. I was going to say "a cup of sugar" but then I remembered that British recipes measure dry ingredients by weight, and it would be in grams, not ounces, and then I realized this meant that she'd be carrying a bowl, not a measuring cup like Americans do, so I had to change that. There's the "u" in "neighbours". "Tiggy" is a British colloquialism for tag. "Garden" is used instead of "yard".

The actual writing was easy - maybe a minute at the most. The research took up the other nine of my ten minutes a day.
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Today's a research day, sorta...

This weekend is the Memorial Day holiday in the U.S. but, of course, not elsewhere in the world, because every country has its own set of holidays. Things are different in different places, and when writing scenes set in other places, it's important to use that place's concepts and words.

So here's today's challenge. Select a foreign place to write a scene in. (Select an English-speaking place; dealing with foreign languages, even translated to English by the TARDIS, gets tricky.) Do a bit of research to find a word, phrase, or concept that's different over there, then write no more than two paragraphs using it.

Then, go back over your writing and research what you wrote to see if other things need to be adjusted as well. As an example, if you choose the word 'boot' (in England, the trunk of a car), you might write a paragraph describing Sarah Jane's car in SJA. Then, you should check the other parts of the car that you mention to see if the Brits use different words for them as well, e.g. 'windscreen' instead of 'windshield', 'tyre' instead of 'tire', or even 'drive' instead of 'driveway' and 'pavement' instead of 'sidewalk', or 'colour' instead of 'color'.

Here are a few British concepts as inspiration.

'going on holiday' instead of 'taking a vacation'
'over the road' instead of 'across the street'
'motorway' instead of 'highway' or 'freeway'
'brilliant' instead of 'great' or 'awesome'
'dressing gown' instead of 'bathrobe'
'knickers' instead of 'underwear'
'Boxing Day' as the day after Christmas

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