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 "I used to be such a good liar." - The Doctor, Spare Parts

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The TARDIS' metal screeching rang out as the box materialized. It was a cold day on Ambira, the two small moons had just set over the horizon. 
As the TARDIS doors opened, the blond Time Lord stepped out.

"Ambira, Nyssa!" he exclaimed "Boiling warm oceans, sparkling trees, the perfect place to-" He paused and took a deep breath "Oh." 

The air had a slightly pungent aroma, and the unmistakable tang of decay. Looking around, it was hard to not notice that the "sparkling" trees had turned to rot. And what were once presumably crowded shops and buildings were boarded-up. They had to have arrived on the wrong planet,  unless...he couldn't tell her.

At that instant, Nyssa entered from the wardrobe room.

"Doctor," she began "Are you sure this is the accepted form of dress?" Her normal attire had been traded for a jumper with pink stripes and a deep plum colored skirt.

"Ah, Nyssa" he replied, "You might...want to consider something else. "

The Trakenite frowned. "Doctor, you said most women on Ambira wore this," She paused, noticing he was making his way towards the console. "This is the right planet , isn't it?"

The Time Lord was already fiddling with several buttons.

"I-it is, but I just realized there are far more relaxing places." He turned a knob "H-have I mentioned the Eye of Orion?"

"Several times" she answered, watching him curiously " But I was rather looking forward to seeing this planet. You made sound" She spoke a bit quieter "Almost like Traken." 

The Doctor stuffed his hands in his pockets.

"Nyssa, I would really prefer you it you changed into something else" he finally said.

As his companion made her way back to the wardrobe room, her words sunk in.  Almost like Traken was indeed an accurate description-if his suspicions were correct, this planet was only hours away from going Supernova, and he and Nyssa would be caught in the wake.


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Lara straightened her blouse and smoothed back her hair before she started undoing the locks on her door. Ten hours of sleep hadn’t been enough to wipe the effects of last night’s cheap wine, but she wasn’t going to admit that to Kit. “I hadn’t expected you’d even be conscious yet,” she began before she even pulled the door open, “but your call sounded urgent, and far be it from me to….” She fell silent at the thoroughly unexpected sight of a tall and not entirely bad-looking man standing behind her friend.

Kit obviously had been expecting Lara’s surprise. “Yes. Lara, this is Alex. Alex, my best mate Lara.”

Alex nodded. “Pleasure.”

Lara gave him a good once-over, concluding that her initial impression was correct - not bad-looking at all. She settled against the doorframe with a fist on her hip and a twinkle in her eye. “I see you didn’t go straight home from here last night. The pub on Wainwright first, I’d wager?”

Kit sneered at the implication. “Absolutely not. May we come in?”

“Of course.” She backed up out of the doorway, welcoming them in with an exaggerated bow and scrape. As she secured the door, Kit flopped into her favourite armchair. Interestingly, Alex chose a stool in the far corner of the room, opposite both the front door and sliding doors that led to the balcony, rather than the other armchair or the sofa. He seemed far more interested in watching the doors than in anything the two women said or did.

“At least you’ve got good taste, especially through a pair of beer goggles.” Lara swallowed her disappointment that neither Kit nor her new friend reacted to her tease. She took her customary seat in the vacant armchair and turned to Alex. “So if you aren’t her latest conquest, then who are you?”

“Lara, behave,” Kit snapped. “Alex is my cousin.”

Lara laughed. “Madam, I’ve known you since we were three, and I know perfectly well that you have only one cousin, Isaac, on your deadbeat father’s side.”

Kit’s eyes twitched to the man sitting stock-still in the corner. “I didn’t say first cousin. A few times removed.” She frowned, shaking her head. “Or is it fourth cousin? I never get that straight.”

Lara crossed her arms. “And he suddenly appeared on your doorstep this morning?”

Kit brightened. “Actually, he did. My uncle George called, said Alex was in a bit of a bind, needed a place to stay for a bit, and he was on the train down from Manchester. Wasn’t off the phone ten minutes when he knocked.”

“So, this cousin you never knew you had, he just appears and moves in, and you’re okay with that?”

Playing with the strap of her handbag in her lap, Kit shrugged. “What am I supposed to do? Family and all. It’ll only be for a few weeks, hopefully.”

Lara looked back and forth between the two, her friend who seemed to be avoiding all eye contact and the stranger who sat placid and unfazed, almost emotionless. She sighed. “All right. We’ll just go with that. So what do you need from me?”

(This is a scene from an origfic I’m working on. The fic is about Kit, but I turned it around and wrote it from Lara’s point of view for this challenge. Alex is totally not her relative, but he’s also not her one-night stand. At this point, she can’t tell Lara who he is, but Lara will find out later on.)
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Write a scene with person A and person B (or more, if you like), with the point-of-view in third person and the perspective either neutral (the narrator does not know either person's thoughts) or biased towards person A (though without writing person A's direct thoughts like "she thought, "Wow, this guy is weird").

The thing is, person B is lying - about one thing, or maybe a few things, or maybe everything he says; that's up to you - but the reader doesn't know he is. Be descriptive about person B - things he does, tone of voice, phrasing, etc. - to clue in the reader and/or person A to the deception, or to convince the reader/person A he's truthful - again, your choice.

Some ideas:

  • The Doctor is telling the companion that something is perfectly safe when it actually isn't.
  • A woman is telling her date that she's having a good time when she actually isn't.
  • Person A asked Person B what he has behind his back, and Person B says, "Nothing!" as he drops the item into the potted plant behind him.
  • River is trying to bluff her way past a security guard.

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