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 Not sure if this is the middle or end, Apologies for Drabble but getting ready to go out with fam and packing / straightening up. :)

"I'm not doing it!" Donna protested.
 
The prince gave her a near- uncertain look. "But it's the only way."
 
Glaring at him, she looked once again at the unconscious Doctor on the grass.  "No, I get it. True Love's Kiss and all that . But I'm not doing it. He can keep sleeping . " 
 
The crowd gasped, several of them jeering and shouting at her. 
 
Donna sighed, smoothing out her uncomfortable blue gown.  No getting out of it now, she thought. 
 
Leaning down to be at level with the Doctor, she placed a quick kiss on his cheek.
 
The Doctor's eyes fluttered a little and his already spiked hair practically stood on end. "Donna" he breathed. 
 
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Totally off-the-cuff, a negotiations scene from my origfic.

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Now here's a challenge. Picture yourself picking up a novel and opening to a random page and starting to read whatever's there. Two (or more characters) are talking (maybe they're just sitting and talking, or maybe they're in the middle of trying to save the situation and are shouting at each other to do things, or maybe it's something else entirely). You've come in right in the middle, so you have no context, and they're not overtly stating what's going on, but you get an idea of what's going on based on what they're saying.

That's the challenge: write the middle of a scene, giving no background or context to us, the readers of this comm, but we should be able infer a bit from the dialogue. This might be easiest to do if you work on a scene of a longer WIP - write a small bit of a scene you haven't gotten to yet.

Remember, you want the dialogue to feel natural, so look at it from the point of view of the characters - what would real people actually say? - rather than the point of view of the reader or writer. For example, if your two characters are in the middle of a conversation about someone else, they may never actually say that person's name during the challenge; they may only refer to them as he or she.

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