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I was needing to rewrite this bit as I re-figured where exactly Engama sits within a little sheltered valley at the end of a canyon.

Expand461 words describing the route to Engama )

I'm going to try hard to share something each week here.
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The planet was... rather small.  Only about a dwarf planet, if one was being exact.  
But it was the universe's best kept secret.  The sky was illuminated by three , sparkling purple-green suns which rose each afternoon and set each morning.  The sky was a magnificent shade of light red,  its clouds a soft teal. 

The ground was a thin layer of white grass-  spotted with tiny plants .  The blooms were a sort of striped sunflower- only in pure black and white, which looked like tiny zebra-like windmills popping up from the ground.  And along each one,  a happily buzzing crystalline bee landed, collecting pollen. 

If one were to look up at the sky at a certain time of day,  one could see a flock of beautiful blue and gold birds flying in a V shape,  the beaks emblzened with green tips .  As they ascended,  the leader bird made a noise that was less of a caw and more like soft music, like playing a harpsichord.  And each morning,  the enormous moon stays up for several hours,  its surface dotted with white flecks , turning the light red sky into a a bit of pink glow.  
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 This is...gonna be an interesting one.  So I saw a post earlier that said "What Bores a Reader?" It was different things like characters with no personality, daily routines,  no build up, etc. 

But a big one was detail/ description.   Or... a lot of it.

So,  think about a favorite place. Or maybe it's your character's favorite place. A room, a planet, whatever.  If one were to describe it to an outsider or to a reader, how would you do it? Be as either descriptive (or blunt) as possible. 

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