Fill: Challenge #18 (Doctor Who)

[shivver]

This totally unedited and unpolished. I was reminded of this story idea yesterday and went looking for the WIP I really thought I had, but couldn't find it, so I wrote it (again) as it fits the challenge. I really thought I wrote this already... :/

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Challenge #19

[shivver]

WIP Weekend!!! For today’s challenge, write at least three paragraphs for one of your own projects. Do a bit more in a work-in-progress… Write something concrete for an idea that so far has only been rattling around in your brain… Take one of the fills you’ve done for this comm and write the next scene in the story….You can even go back to something you’ve finished and rework/rewrite/reimagine it… Or, if you prefer, revise and edit a few paragraphs of a WIP to improve style, language, character, plot, etc.

Yes, you have to post the snippet that you do, so don’t work on something that you want to keep secret. :) Or, if you completed and posted your work, post the link!

Fill-Challenge 18

[romanajo123]

"Oi! You're on my foot , spaceman!" 

"Sorry!  Dropped the sonic screwdriver." 

"Doctor, when I said I wanted a holiday,  a cabin with a dodgy electrical system wasn't what I had in mind."

"Yeah sorry, used to be a fairly nice place. Well, that was back in the seventies. Or was it, the eighties?"

"Could you stop reminiscing and maybe work out how to get the power back on?"

"We're cut off.  And the storm is probably not helping." 

"How wizard.  Don't you have some sort of...Martian power crystal or something to fix it?"

"Martians don't really have power crystals. They're more...big green lizards."

"Well if you take me to Mars, I'll remember that. Now can you at least help find the kitchen in this place? Least we won't starve."

"It was just that-Donna, you might not want to move."

"Why? Is one of your big green Martian friends in here with us?"

"No but there's something...crawling on you."

"Just what I needed today."