Challenge #39
Apr. 8th, 2022 04:03 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Let's do a character introspection today! Have a character reflect upon something that just happened - for example, your character's back in the TARDIS, unwinding after the last harrowing adventure and thinking about what they just experienced and how it affected them or how it relates to their own personal history.
There are a few ways you can do this. You could have them thinking things directly, as in Oo, I hate it when the Doctor treats me like that!. You could do it indirectly by the narrator, as in "She just couldn't get the condescension dripping from his voice out of her head." You could describe what they're doing and use that to communicate what they're thinking, as in "She opened her book and tried to lose herself in the romance, but found herself gripping the blanket with white-knuckled fists as the memory of his voice floated through her head."
There are a few ways you can do this. You could have them thinking things directly, as in Oo, I hate it when the Doctor treats me like that!. You could do it indirectly by the narrator, as in "She just couldn't get the condescension dripping from his voice out of her head." You could describe what they're doing and use that to communicate what they're thinking, as in "She opened her book and tried to lose herself in the romance, but found herself gripping the blanket with white-knuckled fists as the memory of his voice floated through her head."