Feb. 27th, 2023

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Today's challenge is an exercise in character.

First, choose two characters that have very different personalities, or create two such characters, and identify a couple of those differences. For example, one character could be optimistic in outlook while the other is pessimistic. Or, one could be from a high social class and be rather snooty, while the other is from a low social class and is obsequious. You could even go with temporary traits, like one of them is pretty normal (for them) but the other is upset about something that happened recently and is snippy, touchy, or even outright angry.

Once you have your characters, expose them to something and have them react to it in a way that illustrates the differences in their characters. They could be entering a place they've never been before, or opening a gift, or watching a new TV show. Maybe a third character did something unexpected.

Focus on revealing these characters to the reader via actions and dialogue, rather than having the narrator telling the reader what these people are like or what they're thinking.
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 ( Today I was thinking about the Library and Donna and Lee.  So have a thing set in the world where they were married) 

Donna stirred a little,  her eyes fluttering open as sunlight started to stream through the windows of their bedroom.  
It was too early- it always seemed to be too early.  

"Morning" she groggily said,  slowly rising and placing a little kiss on Lee's cheek. 

"M, Morning" he said.  He was already up and getting dressed.  "M, Mrs. McAvoy" he added, returning to little kiss. 

That was something Donna was still getting used to.  But she loved it. 

The couple proceeded to the kitchen,  where their children were waiting on breakfast. 

"Mummy!" Ella exclaimed, running over and wrapping Donna in a hug. 

"Well, good morning , sweetheart" Donna smiled, lifting her daughter slightly.  "So, cereal then?" 

The rest of the day preceded as normal- kids went to the park, Lee was working.  But Donna couldn't help but feel an inkling as the sun began to set.  Like, something she was forgetting about.  Leaning back on the sofa as her children were engrossed by the cartoons on TV, a part of her was wondering if it actually mattered. That this was her family,  her life now. 

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