Challenge 238 (orig)
Jul. 28th, 2023 07:21 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
(Original because I'm also submitting for class . Also working on POV and tense)
"Anyone sitting here?"
He looked up from crushing candy on his phone at the question. It took him a few seconds to realize the woman was talking to him.
"No?" he replied, moving over slightly on the bench. Then after several boring seconds , asked. " So, which bus are you waiting for?"
" The one to Raleigh. Going home for the weekend."
He noticed her tiny suitcase. " College?"
"Yeah, home for my cousin's wedding so I brought the essentials. You?"
He shifted a little nervously. " Virginia, I'm a navy brat. "
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"Anyone sitting here?"
For just a second, I look up from Candy Crush, like being brought back to reality, to notice the lady sitting next to me on the bench.
"No?" I say, feeling now like I have to small talk "So, which bus are you waiting for?"
"The one to Raleigh. Going home for the weekend." Right then, I notice she's not carrying a lot.
"College?" I ask, taking a shot in the dark, That suitcase only looks like it can hold a few outfits.
"Yeah, home for my cousin's wedding. So I brought the essentials. You?"
Now I'm nervous. I move around a little on the bench. "Virginia, I'm a navy brat."
"Anyone sitting here?"
He looked up from crushing candy on his phone at the question. It took him a few seconds to realize the woman was talking to him.
"No?" he replied, moving over slightly on the bench. Then after several boring seconds , asked. " So, which bus are you waiting for?"
" The one to Raleigh. Going home for the weekend."
He noticed her tiny suitcase. " College?"
"Yeah, home for my cousin's wedding so I brought the essentials. You?"
He shifted a little nervously. " Virginia, I'm a navy brat. "
----
"Anyone sitting here?"
For just a second, I look up from Candy Crush, like being brought back to reality, to notice the lady sitting next to me on the bench.
"No?" I say, feeling now like I have to small talk "So, which bus are you waiting for?"
"The one to Raleigh. Going home for the weekend." Right then, I notice she's not carrying a lot.
"College?" I ask, taking a shot in the dark, That suitcase only looks like it can hold a few outfits.
"Yeah, home for my cousin's wedding. So I brought the essentials. You?"
Now I'm nervous. I move around a little on the bench. "Virginia, I'm a navy brat."