Date: 2025-01-19 05:50 pm (UTC)
shivver: (musicspheres)
From: [personal profile] shivver
Hi! Welcome to our little comm! It's so exciting to see new people, and I'm glad to hear that we've inspired you to write!

This was a fascinating little ficlet! I don't know much about The Hunger Games except the basic premise of who Katniss is and what she has to do, and I had no idea it was written in first-person present. You've done a great job of maintaining that immediacy of experience, and I especially love how you expressed the newness and wonder of their experience with the salade nicoise.

I also love that Weft started saying "Thank you" to the servers just to annoy Aelia. :D
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