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 (this is something I've thought about for awhile,  though I do not think I've ever written it down.   Trying to write Seven and Ace as if they were in a fantasy AU .  Feedback is definitely welcome) 

The Magician was, in a word, eccentric.  A funny little man who had a penchant for playing the sppons and daft little hats. His favorite one was straw and went well with his robes, adorned in question marks.  '

His apprentice was... rebellious? Mischevious? A bit disobedient at points? But he'd taken her on once he discovered her knack and talent with creating storms.   Ace, as she tended to go by,  had been brought to him in a cyclone and became engrossed with learning his craft. 

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It had been a day like any other: tea, a lesson, practise, then rest.  Only this time, the lesson had been interrupted by a group of Dragons.
The Magician watched on as his pupil tried her hardest to send them away.  But after a few moments, a loud sudden BOOM and a vast of amount of sparks was all the evidence he needed to see her orogress. 

" Blimey,  " Ace breathed,  " Thought my timing was better than that.  Was only trying to get rid of them." 

"Perhaps we need to refresh your memory on casting" the magician suggested.  "After tea of course. I do believe it's getting cold." 

Date: 2023-01-05 01:50 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shivver
This is just a note, a piece of information, not a criticism, and certainly you can interpret these challenges in any way you want - but I just wanted to say that you wrote a different *genre* rather than a different *style*. That's totally fine - you can do whatever you want to fill any challenge and it doesn't have to have any relation to what the challenge asked - but I wanted to make sure you understood the difference.

Fantasy is a *genre* marked by magic and fantastical creatures and stuff. You can write fantasy (or any genre) using different *styles* - Tolkien is different from Moorcock, Sanderson, Rowling, fairy tales (Brothers Grimm), and especially your own style (whatever that may be).

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