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 (So I been watching Once Upon a Time s2 and brain is in that mode)

"How much longer?" Michelle asked, her knuckles turning almost white from clinging to the cave wall.

A thunderous roar loudly rang out.

Jason looked deep into one of the tunnels  "I;d say we've got about ...twelve minutes until the portal closes and we can get home."

Kurt tapped his friend on the shoulder. "Except, we've got that thing guarding it."

Another roar.

"Aren't you supposed to be a knight?" Michelle asked,  before starting to pick through Kurt's backpack. "Where's your sword?" 

"Oh yeah, a wooden sword against something that breathes fire, that's a great plan." Kurt replied sarcastically. He pointed at the pink crown on Michelle's head. "Anyway, you're supposed to be a princess.  where's your wand?"

"It's a staff!" she exclaimed. "And I...left it at home." 

Jason sighed. "Guys, hate to interrupt, but we've down to seven minutes.  Let's just try to sneak past the dragon and get to the portal if any of us want to live to finish middle school." 

Date: 2022-01-22 07:06 pm (UTC)
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Nice! I really like the way you set up the situation subtly, with cool details (knuckled turning white, thunderous roar, etc). Also, love the middle school sarcasm. The only thing I don't get - how do they get home after "the portal closes"? That's something I can't tell from the scene, though I suppose it would be explained before this.

I have never seen OUaT, though I just read the Wikipedia description and it sounds fun. I like how the showrunners say they wanted to make a hopeful, optimistic show - that is so rare nowadays.

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